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題目問的是能否從失敗中學(xué)到有益的東西？作者在第一段講了幾句相關(guān)的話后過渡到正題，提出了自己的中心論點(diǎn)即value is not found only in success。
主題句＝主題（topic）＋句子（controlling idea）
稍顯遺憾的是，兩個(gè)例子還可以更深刻地挖掘一下，和中心主題之間的聯(lián)系還可以更緊密些。
同時(shí)，為使語氣不那么絕對，作者提到了特蕾莎修女，認(rèn)為很少有人像她那樣在任何時(shí)代都會(huì)被人當(dāng)做英雄推崇。
4分作文： Some people would say that something that is not successful does not have any value. I would have to disagree with this statement. Sometimes, things that are not successful still have some value. For example, the Columbia space shuttle and the Vietnam War were not successful, but they had value. Thus, it is true that something not successful can still have value. For instance, the Columbia disaster. Columbia was destroyed in an accident when the shuttle tried to re-enter the atmosphere. This accident was a horrible failure and many people were very upset by it. The value, though, comes from the new way in which we now look at things. Because of Columbia, the space program now know what is wrong. Hopefully, they will change it. Vietnam is also an example of something not successful. We went to Vietnam in an attempt to get rid of communists. Thewar went on for a while, but we were not able to win. Many soldiers were killed and the public were very angry about the whole thing. Soon there were many protests across the country and college students especially became active against the war. By the time the war was ended the people were very upset with their country. These two examples show that something not successful can still have value. As we have seen, both Columbia and the Vietnam War were not successful. Yet, we got something of value out of them. 【點(diǎn)評】 開始段落把中心觀點(diǎn)講出來了，并且也有thesis statement。
文章引用運(yùn)動(dòng)場上的一句常用語It's not whether you win or lose, it's how you play the game.（結(jié)果不重要，過程重要）。
失敗雖然令人不快，讓人飽受挫折，但失敗是成功之母，只有經(jīng)歷了失敗，吸取了更多的教訓(xùn)，才可能獲得最后的成功等等。
An essay in this category demonstrates adequate mastery, although it will have lapses in quality. A typical essay
第三段舉了莎士比亞的例子，作者認(rèn)為莎士比亞雖然創(chuàng)作了許多英雄的形象，但他自己不能被稱為英雄，因?yàn)槲覀儗λ救诉�是了解很少的。作者在這里提出了當(dāng)代文學(xué)家一直在爭論的一個(gè)話題，就是莎士比亞到底是不是那些偉大作品的真正作者。
用一種簡單的語言也能得滿分嗎？答案是肯定的。本文就是一例，通篇使用的詞匯都比較簡單，但并不呆板，流暢猶如小溪，活潑潑的，也惹人喜愛。
To prepare for the final examination, the room was crowded. ［×］
第二段作者介紹了哥倫比亞航天飛機(jī)失事的過程及帶給NASA的經(jīng)驗(yàn)教訓(xùn)，這個(gè)例子確實(shí)也能證明作者的中心論點(diǎn)，但是作者沒有處理好文章的筆墨，他把大量的文字都用來描寫失事帶給NASA經(jīng)驗(yàn)教訓(xùn)以外的東西了。
上面談到的關(guān)于SAT作文的開頭結(jié)尾和正文的寫法，是一個(gè)行之有效的套路，同學(xué)們可以按這個(gè)模式去練習(xí)，逐步形成適合自己的一個(gè)寫作方式。
在講了幾句相關(guān)的提示性話語后，作者非常鮮明地提出了自己對這個(gè)問題的看法（In fact, the quality of a product is far more important），并接著通過寫最近發(fā)生的例子及文學(xué)界的一些例子來支持自己的觀點(diǎn)。
同樣，你的字體不端正，別人也會(huì)很難辨認(rèn)。
總的來說，這篇作文是個(gè)典型的4分作文，作者對作文題有著較深的把握，并且用了適當(dāng)?shù)睦觼碜C明他的觀點(diǎn)，結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，段落自然。
使用一個(gè)例子的作文，能把這一個(gè)例子進(jìn)行充分挖掘，建立例子和主題之間的緊密聯(lián)系。
這篇作文也反映了作者的語言使用技巧和遣詞造句能力，如places a premium on success, dismiss failures, horrific failure等等。
● SAT作文是寫作的3個(gè)section之一
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