課程標(biāo)題:2018許昌sat課程一般多少錢(qián)
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【點(diǎn)評(píng)】
我們真的希望聽(tīng)到別人真心的建議嗎
如果只舉一個(gè)例子,對(duì)很多中國(guó)學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō),文章恐怕寫(xiě)不長(zhǎng),說(shuō)服力也不夠;要是舉太多的例子,限于篇幅,可能每個(gè)例子很難寫(xiě)得深刻,同時(shí)也顯得雜亂。
另外,文章的句式結(jié)構(gòu)靈活,是簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)雜句的混合,該簡(jiǎn)單就簡(jiǎn)單,該復(fù)雜就復(fù)雜,同時(shí)復(fù)雜句里把句子的核心內(nèi)容用主句形式表達(dá),次要內(nèi)容用從句形式表達(dá),如第一段最后一句Instead, both of these activities can work together to motivvate you, as I've learned from my own experience。
因此,作者也順著洪堡的思路,支持“態(tài)度”更加重要的觀點(diǎn)。
【作者觀點(diǎn)分析】
結(jié)束段落只有兩句話(huà),雖然講的內(nèi)容都符合SAT作文要求,但只有上半部分,沒(méi)有下半部分即“發(fā)揮”。
比如,SAT滿(mǎn)分作文的一個(gè)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是邏輯性強(qiáng),但這個(gè)邏輯性強(qiáng)又是怎么量化的呢?
6分范文:
3分作文: Sometimes, things that are not successful still have some value. For example, the Columbia space shuttle was not successful but was valuable. The Columbia disaster it was really sad that the Columbia blew up and the astronauts died. I saw it on my TV and cried. They found pieces for days and days all over Texas. But it was valuable like that Challenger that blew up a long time ago because it makes us want to get it right. We want to fix it so it doesn't happen again and so regular people can go to space like that kid from N*Synch tried to do. And so we will keep going to space and getting satellites for satellite TV and spying and stuff. And so NASA and the President are going to go to Mars next. Something not successful can still have value because we will go to space even if theColumbia disaster happened. 【點(diǎn)評(píng)】 這是一篇讓人哭笑不得的跑題作文,能拿3分也足以說(shuō)明SAT作文給分還是很寬松的。
就是說(shuō),寫(xiě)作的最后分?jǐn)?shù)要依賴(lài)一個(gè)考生的語(yǔ)法試題的得分和作文得分的結(jié)合(請(qǐng)見(jiàn)第6頁(yè)的SAT寫(xiě)作部分打分表。
在那篇關(guān)于哥倫比亞失事的范文里,如果你對(duì)這個(gè)事情本身比較清楚,你完全可以把哥倫比亞失事這件事寫(xiě)成個(gè)narrative的形式,甚至花點(diǎn)筆墨來(lái)描寫(xiě)失事的過(guò)程都無(wú)傷大雅。
第二步是確定論點(diǎn)
Every age, and every culture has its heroes. In some times and places the heroes have been gods or god-like creatures from mythology, or mortals apparently much above the mass of humanity. But today,sports stars, film stars, and political leaders with clay feet have replaced Ram, Achilles, Cleopatra, and Alexander. In fact there are almost no heroes of any age that can withstand our tendency to debunk. There are figures who will always be in the history books, but they won't always be regarded as heroes.
可以這么說(shuō),當(dāng)我們?cè)谧龅诙酱_定論點(diǎn)的時(shí)候,事實(shí)上是受到第三步影響的。
開(kāi)始段落的基本套路是講些堂而皇之的話(huà),但是這些話(huà)必須要圍繞著一些關(guān)鍵詞展開(kāi)。
德國(guó)近代著名的自由主義政治思想家、教育家、外交家、比較語(yǔ)言學(xué)家和語(yǔ)言哲學(xué)家威廉馮洪堡(Wihelm von Humboldt,17671835),倡導(dǎo)“學(xué)術(shù)自由”和“教學(xué)與研究相統(tǒng)一”的精神。
本文的第二、三段都是證明了“在XX情況下,有的人說(shuō)話(huà)并不是為了要對(duì)方告知事實(shí)”的存在,因此屬于典型的證反文章。
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